Portrait Shoot #1

Here is my first true attempt with my new lighting (see Starters Kit).  I was cramped up in a low basement and I found out from this shoot that the LCD on my camera was not adjusted correctly.  I was using 1 flash 1/16 power camera right thru umbrella and 1 flash blowing the background nuclear.  Over all these turned out ok for a first attempt but the lighting turned out to be a bit hot.  Hair light was needed for proper separation.  Maybe some shape or color on the background would have been good too.